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Dead Note

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He gave me the note then ran into the dark. I could guess what this said without brothering. I ripped it open and read it out loud. 'Hello, well I am sorry but we are not working. I have someone else that I have liked for so long. Don't hate me!' I dropped the note to the ground and kept walking. Could he of got that far, I started to make my steps sharper to catch up with him. There he was steadily just walking with no care. He had no knowledge that I was watching him waiting for the perfect moment. It took ages but the moment came He kept looking back knowing now something was following him. I knew where we was, he has gone to our old hide out. I ran and grabbed the gun before he could even process the thought. It was there looking so smooth and un-touched. I cocked it and saw the gun was loaded. I walked slowly towards him. I screeched to make him turn round which he did. He was crying, I felt nothing for him now just pity. I smashed the shotgun into his legs making him fall to his knees, before he could say anything I threw the loaded gun into his mouth. His tears still raced down his face. I pulled the trigger releasing both bullets into his helpless body. Blood went everywhere as I dropped the gun. He body lifeless crashed to the ground, leaving me feel alot better.
Okay so tis be about someone.
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goingtochristyroad's avatar
Seriously though, stopit.